tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1073971296422223635.post3899802640680539803..comments2023-10-17T16:37:03.020+05:30Comments on BLUES OF AN IDLER: It's a brand new Indiaisasihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04624224102025265888noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1073971296422223635.post-61367904913081039422012-11-29T21:26:37.579+05:302012-11-29T21:26:37.579+05:30Good attempt, but looks like a crude prose-poetic ...Good attempt, but looks like a crude prose-poetic attempt. Words should be more powerful, apt and precise and as brief as possible. For example, there is no need to write "where ignorance leads to .. while knowledge leads to etc." If you say just "Ignorance leads to..., knowledge leads to..." it will be more effective. You read a lot of poetry, and then you yourself will gradually come to understand. Meaning and emotions conveyed should move the heart and make the mind think.I.M.Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08966462873533656616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1073971296422223635.post-90430348512078349912012-11-29T21:07:01.345+05:302012-11-29T21:07:01.345+05:30Good one Sasi :)Good one Sasi :)Abhinayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15709301424394953270noreply@blogger.com